At last! I had reached the small house I was looking for. Soon after a round Snowman appeared and dived into a giant chest, he showed me a picture of his enormous hometown. But before very long he leaped to his feet, he was heading home! I tried to stop him, he was my new friend! But he just kept going! Moments later we were in the air! Most kids would be scared to death, not me, this was awesome! I could see beautiful trees,hedges and small houses as we were in the air!, I felt the cold breeze howling against my ears as we continued our journey. Some time later we had reached a town civilised by tiny houses,empty garages,and a large church, it was surrounded by tall snow-capped mountains. We had later reached the docks. The docks were made up of many large containers, a wide wharf (of course) and a few enormous oil plants. Me and the huge Snowman had soon met a huge ship, inside I saw attendants having a great time dancing. But I had to keep going, there were nothing but water in sight,until,at last,me and the giant Snowman had reached land! The only species we could find were mountain goats. However… we had eventually came across a group of penguins, we were going down, this was our stop!,seconds after we had landed, a strange red figure appeared… It was Santa!
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ReplyDeletekia ora ko Caedance toku ingoa ko Te kauru toku akomanga ko vennesa toku kaiako ko John windleborn toku tumauki [ hi I am Caedance my class is Te Kauru my teacher is Mrs Davan my principal is John] you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot dude, is there anything I could have done better?
DeleteHi Ace, I like how you added lots of describing words to your writing and made your story interesting.
ReplyDeleteThankyou Danait, Is there anything I could improve?
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